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October 13, 2010
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~Soberbia-Roy Oct 14, 2010  Student Digital Artist
woah really well executed! i like the shades in the cape
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=KreepingSpawn Oct 13, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
vicious!! nice energy.
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Agree with Teppo- a bit too chaotic with the lines. But there's a quick fix- use a whitener (pref. inking white) to clarify the parts of the face and metallic parts (specifically the boots), and solidify some of those blacks- it should help a bit.

Scratchboard is a good way to practice light/dark balancing on these super black images, and allows for a greater control of white and dark points, and it might give you a better effect with eh style i think your going for. :spyed:
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~TeppoYlitalo Oct 13, 2010  Student General Artist
I'm not much of a critic, but I can tell for sure, that your hatching looks messy. You'd better take your time with them. Have a look at :iconvinz-el-tabanas: and :iconyoung-art: and maybe :iconnemafronspain:. I've got high respect for them. Also, try to get a hold of that nib pen (?) or whatever you're inking with... You've got very harsh lines there, too... The less lines you need, the more simplistic and the less eyes get attracted to your hatching.

I think this is the key...
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